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 Which one do you think is the most important for high school teacher (age from 15 to 18)

1. the ability to give students advice to plan for their future;

2. the ability to find which students need help and provide them with help;

3. the ability to encourage students to learn on themselves outside of the classroom;

In today's modern world with its unexampled progress in science and technology education plays an absolutely essential role as far as the development of a nation is concerned. Teachers, as the main element of the educational system have an undeniably determining impact on children's learning process. In this regard there are many qualifications that a great teacher should enjoy. I, personally, believe that the best quality of a teacher is having the ability to give students proper advice to plan for their future for a number of reasons two of which are of prominent importance compared to others, which are elaborated upon hereunder.

First and foremost, our educational system suffers from a number of flows and defects concerning the definition of a purposeful curricular. Our educational systems face serious problems by using orthodox methods of education, which have plagued it. It would be no exaggeration if I say that a lot of students in my country opt for a university major that they are not interested, talented or even personally adopted. This is why our graduates are in desperate need of gaining additional training after graduation. Hence(因果论证), teachers can be a great help if they can ameliorate this situation. They can provide students with proper guidance and consultation to help them recognize their skills, talents and real interests. They can pave the way for students to lead a planned purposeful life.

Having discussed the issue form previous perspective I would rather look at it from another point of view. Teenagers at this very young ages are not mature enough to find their way and anticipate the future clearly. They cannot recognize which way is proper to pursue and which is not. Therefore, teachers, as the experienced, mature and educated people who have a meticulous observation on students, can provide them with some invaluable information about future. For example(举例论证), as I remember when I was at high school I had a dream of becoming a firefighter, since during that age, I was full of daring, courage and bravery, and I just wanted to participate in risky fearless and heroic activities although I had no interest in the training courses related to this occupation. As a matter of fact, my chemistry teacher noticed my reluctance and guided me with patience to find my real enthusiasm and pursue my dream. If it was not for her guidance, I would not have prevented a wrong decision.

In summary, taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration it can be concluded that the best quality of a good teacher is to help students find their goal. Not only does it compensate for deficiency of educational system regarding the lack of a purposeful curricular, but also it helps children to have wiser choices.

作者是如何展开自己的观点的?是如何说清楚自己的思路的?

如何展开一个观点，关键在于是否能够灵活运用论证方式。主体段基本遵循总分结构，即写一个主旨句，再围绕主旨句用各种论证方法进行充分的拓展和论证。我们常用的论证方法有：举例论证，对比论证，原因论证，结果论证，解释说明，，假设论证。

整理文章逻辑大纲：

首段总观点：I, personally, believe that the best quality of a teacher is having the ability to give students proper advice to plan for their future

中间段分论点1：First and foremost, our educational system suffers from a number of flows and defects concerning the definition of a purposeful curricular.

--teachers can be a great help if they can ameliorate this situation. They can provide students with proper guidance and consultation to help them recognize their skills, talents and real interests.

中间段分论点2： Teenagers at this very young ages are not mature enough to find their way and anticipate the future clearly.

-- As a matter of fact, my chemistry teacher noticed my reluctance and guided me with patience to find my real enthusiasm and pursue my dream.

积累话题下词汇和句子：

1. have an undeniably determining impact on

Parents` behaviors would have an undeniably determining impact on their own kids, since the kids would commonly imitate those behaviors instinctively.

2. elaborate

All of my ideas has been elaborated in the letter in order to express my true feelings.

3. purposeful curricular

Plenty of students takes the purposeful curriculars in order to strengthen their knowledge accumulation in various fields.

4. Orthodox

Plenty of students has been fed up with orthodox curriculars due to the outmoded content, which seems to be a severe issue for the education.

5. Plague

Numerous students treat those complex scientific subjects as a method to plague them,thus teachers are supposed to switch their teaching method and curriculum provision to large extent.

6. Ameliorate

Some pragmatic regulations should be implemented in order to ameliorate the terrible traffic congestions.

7. Pave the way

Students should pave the way in their accumulation of skills and knowledge reserve in order to obtain a promising future.

8. Anticipate

Numerous parents anticipate their kids to receive the further education, which may drive students feel stressed-out.

9. Pursue

Uncountable youngsters feel stressful when pursuing their promising future.

10. meticulous

Students should treat academic meticulously, after doing so, they may be able to accomplish astonishing achievement in the future.

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