学会这3步，让你托福写作随手写出长难句！

在托福写作中，同学们常常苦恼为为什么自己写的句子都短小精悍，言简意赅，常常觉得自己已经无话可说。今天我们一起来看看，怎么样才能随手写出长难句。

1. 添加定语

定语主要包括形容词和定语从句。

1）添加形容词

增加形容词属于最最基本操作了。

举例子时候，同学们都喜欢写某人是干啥的这样的句子。那么可以储备一些描写人物的形容词，例如successful/hard-working/diligent/intelligent等。

My uncle is a businessman.

My uncle is a successful businessman.

My friend Lily is a high school student.

My friend Lily is a hard-working high school student.

2）添加定语从句

定语从句会使一个句子如虎添翼，又漂亮又好用。

My uncle is a businessman.

My uncle is a businessman who has a large company.

My friend Lily is a high school student.

My friend Lily is a high school student, who is good at swimming.

Amy failed in the final exam.

Amy failed in the final exam, which was extremely difficult.

2. 添加状语

1）添加副词

We are working.

We are working hard.（加副词hard）

We are working extremely hard. （加副词extremely）

2）添加不定式（作目的状语）

给句子增加一个to do，增加一个目的，会使句子内容更加详细。

具体形式有to do/in order to do/so as to.

Government should develop clean energy+in order to reduce pollution.

Students must do housework+in order to cultivate their responsibility.

University students like to do part time jobs to earn extra money.

We study hard+so as to pass the final exam.（注意so as to不能置于句首）

3）添加介词短语

介词短语几乎可以表达所有形式的状语，包括时间、方式、地点、原因、条件、结果、目的等。当你想在句子里增加时间、地点、方式，介词短语是最最好用的了。

介词短语=介词+名词或名词替代品 （动名词、名词性从句作宾语）

常用的介词短语：

表示时间：

after school, after graduation, before going to bed, for a long time,

表示地点：

at home, at school, in university

表示方式：

by doing sth, with sth, without sth

I go home.

After school I go home by bike/by taking a bus with my friends.

I do housework everyday.

With the help of my sister, I do housework everyday after finishing homework.

I want to earn money.

I want to earn money by taking several part time jobs with my friends at weekend.

3. 添加状语从句

这里强烈推荐增加原因、让步状语两种，状语从句中的红蓝buff为你加持！（状语从句一共有九类，务必至少掌握这两类）

1）添加原因状语

常用引导词：because/since/as/for

特殊引导词：seeing that/considering that/given that

原因状语非常好写，就是多想想为什么！为什么政府要发展清洁能源呢？因为……为什么中学生要做家务呢？由于……为什么大学生要做兼职呢？原因是……

Government should develop clean energy+since it helps to reduce pollution.

Students should do housework+seeing that they are part of the family.

University students like to do part time jobs+considering that these jobs can practice their skills and enrich their work experience.

2）添加让步状语

常用引导词：though、although、even if、even though

让步状语从句其实很简单，就是想想事情的另一面，“虽然”“尽管”。例如，学生应该做家务，虽然他们学习压力山大。小学生应该独立做作业，尽管他们会遇到困难。家长应该陪伴孩子做作业，虽然他们很忙。

Students are supposed to do housework+although they are busy with study.

Government should develop clean energy+even though it is expensive.

University students like to do part time jobs+though it may cause extra pressure.