托福独立写作论点判定

Independent Writing

对于Independent Writing部分，根据文章评分标准，独立写作应该具有清晰地论点且有清晰地细节来证明论点是对的，现在就来简述一下论点的写法

1. 什么是论点和论据

论点=这段文字的主题句=概括这段文字的整体概念

论据=让我们的论点更有说服力

2. 一个论点需要的基本要点

是一个陈述句; 疑问句、感叹句等不可用比较简洁，明了

3. 论点的广义定论

论点=这段文字的主题句=概括这段文字的整体概念

税收好(大观点)---- 政府有钱------建立很多有用的设施-------帮助很多人(中式)

税收好(大观点)---- 帮助很多人(论点)-----政府有钱------建立很多有用的设施(西式)

4. 怎么写论点

A. 论点是容易展开的：细节是容易展开来证明论点是真的，不可以只写论点，可以用多种细节来证明论点是真的，例如像解释，举例子等

B. 论点要完整：论点包括题干和中心思想，不可以在论点中只有一个思想，但是题干完全不提，容易跑题且不完整

C. 论点要关注于某一方面，不可以太宽泛,否则会显得很杂乱

l E.g. Some working parents believe that children centers can provide best care for children, while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Which one is better?

Firstly, there are more professional teachers in children centers thereby causing parents prefer to send children to there.

Firstly, children centers could provide more professional educational care to students.

根据上题可看出，正确的论点应该是第二个，因为第一个论点是一个比较难展开的细节，所以文章写起来会出现“无话可写”的情况，对于第二个论点，第一个点更像是细节支撑

论点是容易展开的

E.g. working alone when taking part in many activities. Do you agree or disagree with this way?

Firstly, working in a small group enables young kids how to work together with the others in the team.

Firstly, working in a small group enables young kids to foster some abilities and social skills.

问题同上，正确的论点应该是第二个，第一个更像是对场景的描述，第一个造成的最后的结果就是第二个;这也符合我们所说的，论点是一个最终的结果，一个概括的事物

论点要完整

E.g. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

To begin with, working in a big company is beneficial to enlarging one’s social circle.

论点尽量不要用it指代，要改写题干

论点要关注于某一方面，不可以太宽泛

E.g. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.

First of all, learning from mistakes is helpful for children.

First of all, allowing children to make mistakes and to learn from mistakes can help children to be independent.

第二个才是正确的，虽然第一个点也可以被展开，但是对于“帮助性的”这个词其实基本上没有细节意义，与其说是论点，这个点其实和观点;论点太宽泛，虽然能展开，但是方面涵盖太多，导致的结果就是细节混乱，可能考生没有办法具体拆分。第二个就是一个很好地论点范本。

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