论托福写作如何Well-organized

托福独立写作评分标准中，well-organized指的是我们的文章分段有序，即文章的段落框架要十分清晰让考官能够迅速了解段落的内容和阐述的内容。

同时well-developed and clearly appropriate explanations指的是有支持你的观点的具体原因，同时要有足够的论据去证明你的观点，有点类似于我们在辩论中的“论点+论据”。

那么什么样的文章算是well-organized呢?那我们一起来看下面的文章。

题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Sample:

首先，开头段引入写作题目，并且表明自己的观点。

A student’s education does not only consist of learning academic subjects. It is also important for students to develop other skills, such as teamwork, and healthy habits that will last them a lifetime. One way to do this is to encourage more participation in sports activities. Although it is important to provide adequate funding for academic services such as the school library, I believe it is important to fund sports activities equally(自己观点).

中间Body段主要是展开自己的论述，主要内容为是支持自己观点的原因以及相关的解释(Opinion+Details)

A student’s primary education goal is to pursue knowledge. Therefore, the school library is very important. However, the resources that a library buys are long-lasting. In addition, students now have resources other than the school library to support their studies(具体原因). For example(举例论证), many students have their own computers and access to the Internet in order to search for the information and material they demand, through which they may figure out their academic issues instead of the library.

Ideally, a school should provide its students with a well- balanced education that helps them develop all of their skills. For this reason, it is important that schools do not ignore sports activities. Setting aside more money for these activities may improve the students` physical condition effectively(原因2). For instance(举例论证), after providing various sports facilities, including gym, basketball court and soccer field, students would feel more motivated to participate in these sports activities, which can strengthen their body function obviously. To name one, they can improve lung capacity via running and physical flexibility through those ball games.

Furthermore, if putting more fund on sports activities, university may provide students with plenty of recreation.(原因3) As for students, sports may be treated as an excellent method to unwind. To explain more, when taking different sports, they can take a rest from their overwhelming academic load and lift up their spirit(因果论证). After doing sports, they are able to release their daily stress and remain an energetic state to embrace the upcoming daily life.

In conclusion(结尾段), universites should definitely spend the same amount of money on sports activites, since the students can benefit from it to large extent both physically and mentally.

从上面的文章来看，我们每一段的格式都相对比较固定，

1. 开头段引入题目，并且表达自己观点;

2. 主体段的第一句话是分论点。这点和中国不一样，中国学生写议论文习惯于把分论点往后放，甚至强调留白的艺术，不给出明确的表达态度的分论点，所以需要特别注意。well developed要求的是分论点的展开，展开的过程中需要有充足的例子，解释，细节(using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification, and/or details)等，这就又涉及到论证方式，论证过程一定要由主要到次要，或者由抽象到具体，有自己的行文逻辑，不可以想起什么就写什么，这样就会造成读者的误解，迷茫。

3. 最后一段为结尾段，用于大致总结我们的所写到的内容，为整个文章画上一个句号。

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