托福独立写作评分标准深度解读

我们今天先给大家看一下托福Independent task独立写作标准：原始分5分

an essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:

1. effectively addresses the topic and task

我们很多学生可以做到能回答问题，但是不是所有学生都能有效回答问题，尤其是碰到一些有特别限制的题目时，会出现答非所问的情况，所以审题要清楚, 避免跑题。

比如题目： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.，这个题不关心现在教育的水平怎么样，有些同学讲到学校里设备比以前更好了，这个就跟题目没什么关系了。

又比如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should offer the internet access to the public free of charge. 学生写到 网络能方便人们的生活。题目中说到了免费，你的讨论中不能少了免费，不能光讲网络的好处。

好了，我们现在就用第一篇的文章，来看看高分是怎么有效地回答问题的。

First of all, advanced technology has made it easier for people to teach themselves at home. Thanks to the tremendous impacts of the information age, endless sources of education are provided through the broad network of mass media. Such intelligent devices like computers and other digital tools are easy to operate and thus could sustain people to complete self-taught courses in many fields. With simple clicks of the mouse, the learning process could begin and run smoothly at home. For instance, a rich supply of online classes helps create a vivid classroom atmosphere for the students. By following each step of instructions on the websites, knowledge could be gained and skills could be accumulated. Furthermore, useful reading materials should be downloaded and installed in portable digital readers. People no longer have to borrow printed books from the library or purchases piles of heavy books from the bookstores. Reading has become more convenient and access to a wide range of books is easier than ever. Besides, communication tools could be made full use of for learners to exchange ideas with their classmates and tutors online. This could definitely ensure studying efficiency.

从这个段落我们可以看出，作者主要是分析了对着科技的发展，人们不再局限于学校的传统教学方式，人们可以借助于一些智能设备比如电脑等进行自学。后面又开始分析了我们这样学习有多么方便，而且丰富的多彩的王桑课堂为学生提供了很好的教室氛围，人们不再从图书馆借阅读书，人们可以读更多的书，可以从网上下载，携带也更方便。

在另外一个中间段落中，作者提到了我们有了更多的学校教育的机会。 人们有了更多自由去自己制定学习计划，也有了更多的学校和课程可供人们去挑选。In addition to the diversified channels of self-study, people today are also blessed with numerous choices of school education. More freedom is rendered to all the social members who could make their own learning plans and a large variety of schools and courses are available for them to choose.

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