托福写作高分满分范文点评

本期作文话题为：成功需要冒风险?

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What does success come from, taking risks or careful planning?

Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risksor chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In youropinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题目需要注意审题，虽然题目给出了两种获得成功的方法，但并没有要求考生必须两者择其一来展开论述。所以大家完全可以写得更加自由一些，比如可以这样写：有时候为了成功是应该冒一些必要的风险，但是为了成功详尽的计划也是必需的。或者说以上两者都有道理，但我认为为了成功，坚持才是最重要的等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

Magazines and newspapers never tire of telling stories aboutpeople who have come to success quickly by taking risks. However, the problemwith taking chances is that, while one can win a fortune, one can also loseeverything. Careful planning helps reduce that possibility, and it is a basicskill that all established business people have. Therefore, I believethat continued success in life willbe the result of careful planning as well as taking risks. Careful planning isa requisite part of life, especially when one's decisions can impact one's ownlife and the lives of others in a significant way. For example, the CEO of acompany must weigh all of his options cautiously. After all, his decisions willimpact not only his life and that of his family but also the lives of hisworkers and families. Due to a miscalculation on his part the company couldincur significant losses. These losses might be so substantial that the companywill be forced to cut jobs in order to save money or save the company itself.Therefore, the CEO's carelessness could cost him his job or, even worse, couldcost the jobs of other workers in the company who might be less well-off thanhim. At the same time, taking chances is necessary on the way to success.People who get too caught-up in careful planning often find themselves unableto make decisions. They are looking for more and more information in order to make a well informed assessment, but they aretaking too long. For example, the same CEO who plans the moves of his companycarefully so as to minimize the possibility of failure faces tough competitionin the business world. In order to stay ahead of his rivals he will have tomake decisions on the fly to beat out competing companies who are trying to buythe same materials or sell similar products. Thus, depending on the situation, taking a riskcould be necessary to save a company or to ensure its prosperity well into thefuture.

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