托福写作中的论点的展开小tips

中的论点的展开是很多学生最大的问题，在论点的展开方向上我们是要有方法的.比如把名词把握住进行分开展开。

解题找分论点例子：

(1). People will spend less time cooking and preparing food in twenty years than they do today.

现象题型-时间花得少的原因：

总观点： I believe the trend is true.

1. First, the advancing technology is making cooking less time-consuming. [方便] 越来越多的新的厨房科技出现，比如微波炉，洗碗机，搅拌机，会使人们花更少的时间在准备和烹饪事物。

2. Second, the fast paced life will deprive people of the time to cook. 毫无疑问，现代生活变得越来越忙，很多人没有选择只能出去吃或者吃快餐。

3. Third, people can easily afford to eat out. [钱] 人们收入的提升导致他们更愿意去高级餐厅吃美味的饭菜犒劳自己。

4. Commercialization will make possible freedom from cooking. ( ready-to-eat food ) 快餐食物，发达的外卖 比人们自己做更方便，所以也导致人们不愿再做饭了。

(2). Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does?

现象题目;happiness 约等于 满足人们的需求;所以实质还是分析 job/ social life的好处、坏处

总观点： jobs play bigger roles than social life.

1. It is a decent job that determines a good material life. 【钱】---有足够的钱才能住得起好的住宅，去高级餐厅吃饭，去周游世界。而这是无论多么热闹的社交生活提供不了的。

2. A decent job also provides better conditions for family. 【人际】---有高工资才能负担得起豪华的家庭旅行或者送孩子去一流的寄宿学校学习。然后，如果有很多聚会要去参加，有很多朋友要去交往，人们反而没有时间去照顾病床上的妻子，辅导做作业有困难的孩子。

3. A job can also offer one a sense of self-betterment, which leads to happiness. 【成就感】---工作无疑能让一个人体会克服挑战的艰辛并且品味克服挑战之后的喜悦。这也是人们在聚会，社交聊天中体会不到的。[注意比较]

(3). university students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study.

利弊题目;分析 basic classes 的好处，坏处

总观点：I disagree with the statement.

1. Making basic science mandatory does not cater to post-university goals. ---很多同学上大学是为了找工作，跟自己专业无关的学习内容对以后就业没有用。

2. Besides, students with no interest in science would lack the proper motivation to learn it well. 【学业】

3. Offering basic science to all the students would be a huge drain on school’s human and financial resources. 【钱】---学校要雇更多的老师去教这些额外的学生，还要安排更多的教室来容纳多出来的班级。

(4). it is more important to have rules about the types of clothing that people wear at work or at school.

利弊题目，分析 穿着规则的 好处,坏处

总观点: it is a good policy.

有规则的好处：

1. It will save them a lot of money on buying clothes. 【钱】如果没有rules, 人们会花更多地钱去购置每个季节需要的jacket, windcheater 和与之相配的shoes; 更别说追逐时尚的人根据潮流更新自己的服饰。

2. Students dressing styles on formal occasions remind employees and students to concentrate more on their duties. 不会因为担心穿做而分心 【学业/工作】

3. Dressing rules help display favorable images to the public. 统一的制服会给顾客更加专业的印象。

坏处：

1. Admittedly, obeying rules of dress at work or at school means the denial of fashion and beauty. 【个性性格】

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