托福独立写作开篇段写法

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开头1：现象+题目改写+作者观点

现象：提出一种普遍现象或值得关注的现象(紧扣论题)作为背景

例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should reward their children with money for the high grades.

A: To some extent, scoring high at school might indicate a promising future. Thus, grades are commonly accept as a reliable criterion to evaluate the potential in a student. In the unprecedentedly competitive society today, most parents are having high ambitions for their children. In order to realize these glamorous expectations, they would spare no cost. A number of parents choose to reward their children with money if they manage to achieve high marks. As far as I am concerned, there are more defects than merits lying in such a measure.

例如：Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

A: In today’s increasingly vigorous job market, two-way selection has become a most typical mode of employment. Both job hunters and employing units are facing equal chances of mutual-assessment. Such a hiring mode marks the noticeable progress of modern economy. Blessed with a large source of job offers, candidates have the freedom to decide which employer suits them best. Some prefer to work for small companies, while others are in favor of larger ones. If I were a job hunter, I would definitely choose a large enterprise.

开头2：事例+背景+题目改写+作者论点

事例： 1. 媒体(电视，电台，报纸，杂志和网络)的报道

2. 自己，朋友，邻居，同事的事例

例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, people were friendlier than they are today.

A: In my childhood, my grandma used to tell me many stories about their “good old days”. They have all been etched deep in my mind. I could never forget them, even down to the smallest details. Those stories illustrated that the relationships between people at that time seemed to be purer and closer. As time goes by, society has undergone dramatic changes and so have people’s feelings towards each other. Realizing this, I have gradually accepted the reality of these changes. Indeed, people in the past were friendlier than people are now.

开头3：问题+回答+题目改写+作者论点

问题：把背景用问题方式提出;

例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy your friendship.

A: What is the most fundamental bond that connects the hearts of friends? From my point of view, the answer lies in the solid basis of honest communication. A mistake in itself is by no means destructive and horrible. It is the harmful remarks or actions that prove fatal and dangerous. Therefore, I would rather let a friend make a mistake than deliberately say or do things that may damage our friendship.

例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to choose friends that have fun with than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.

A: What is supposed to be the definition of true friendship? Without doubt, real friends are those who will stand by your side or render support in time of need and share joy and happiness in time of pleasure. The criteria of choose friends differ among individuals. Nonetheless, there are common features existing in every real friend. As a result, it is best to choose a friend who could not only have fun with us, but also give us support under all circumstances.

以上就是Introduction的四种写法，作为最常用的方法，我们可以根据自己的实际水平和题目灵活运用。对于写作来说，最重要的还是一定要积累并且写出。所以同学们一定要多写多练多改，才能达到真正的写作学习的目的。

开头4：引语+题目改写+作者论点

引语：谚语，名人名言

例如： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

A: In Francis Bacon’s eyes, books could serve human beings in various ways, “…either for pleasures, or for ornament, or for ability.” Factually, there are so many types of good books that it is difficult to summarize their goodness with simple words. As long as readers are able to gain some benefit from the books they have go through, these books are all worth reading. Thus, it is naive to be confined to certain types of books. Not only should people read those about real events, real people and established facts, but also other kinds of books they might be beneficial to readers.

例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.

A: There exists a popular notion in society, that a person can be judged by the friends they make. Obviously, when making friends, the person’s inner qualities are the most important criteria. During the assessment, intelligence and a good sense of humor may frequently be taken into consideration. Admittedly, no one wishes to make friends with a stupid individual or with someone who never makes others laugh. Comparatively speaking, as far as I am concerned, friends with a good sense of humor are equal to those with clever brains.

例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you for a better job or career.

A: Just as a classic Chinese saying denotes, every trade has its master. Indeed, the profound meaning lying in this proverb persuades us that whatever subjects a student learns, are all worthwhile and useful for their future career life. Undeniably, in today’s highly competitive social atmosphere, choosing a popular field of study might prepare students for better job opportunities. However, in my opinion, it is more important to select a subject that suits a person’s interests.

例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

A: Tracing back to my school years, teachers used to give us a heavy load of homework. In fact, the tradition of doing assignment after school is still adopted in all schools today. Just as Confucius once said, “To learn with constant perseverance and practice what you have learned is a pleasure.” The process of doing homework is a perfect conduction of this notion. However, pressure caused by too much homework might bring about negative consequences. In my view, assigning homework every day is necessary, but its amount should not be excessive.