【看电影学托福】大神电影《社交网络》与托福写作进阶教程

导语：最近批改同学们的作文时，老师看到童鞋们在论证时终于放下了Bill Gates退学挣大钱的梗，但还没来的高兴，就发现大家一转身，只是给例子换了个名字，就开始举起了了江湖人称“小Bill Gates（比尔盖茨）”的Mark Zuckerburg（马克·扎克伯格）退学挣大钱的例子。

老师只能苦笑一声：大家还是图样图森破啊！Zuckerberg（马克·扎克伯格）这么活生生的、散发着理性主义七息和不按常理出牌的事业成功人士，怎么只能举出一个层面的例子呢？今天咱们打开传统思维的局限，一起深度挖掘Zuckerberg（马克·扎克伯格）的Facebook和托福写作的深层关系吧！

说起Zuckerberg（马克·扎克伯格），大家一定看过一个大热电影，那个从不拍烂片的、老师非常崇拜的牛导演——大卫芬奇拍摄的“the Social Network（社交网络）”。

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电影最开始的时候就说到了Zuckerberg（马克·扎克伯格）的“黑历史”，他在失恋后（他的失恋可以总结一句话“不作不死”，感兴趣的童鞋可以去参观一下）躲在Harvard（哈佛大学）的宿舍里一边喝闷酒，一边黑进多个学校的数据库窃取了所有女生的照片，创建了“Facemash”——一个给女生外貌打分的网站，结果这个王站流量太大直接挤瘫了学校的服务器，同时，此举也得到了所有的女生集体谴责：看脸的Zuckerberg（马克·扎克伯格）你够了！注孤生！

结果。。。可想而知。。。他被留校察看六个月。。。

但是！下面的一幕，感觉到扑面而来的正能量了不？

原来Facebook的就是这样酝酿出来的！这是不是印证了一个观点：从失败中吸取经验教训，最后能work out（制造）一个billion  dollar idea（亿美元的想法）？

好，咱们来结合一个TPO独立写作题目来练习一下：

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly

and make sure that everything is correct.

Use speci？c reasons and examples to support your answer.（TPO23）

很多同学反馈在写这道题目的时候不知道说什么，打不开思路，只能一遍一遍转着车轱辘话：working quickly and taking risks bene？t us more，原因是这个，结果也是这个，所以我们要working quickly and taking risks…

（老师看到这样的段落，表情是这样的。。。）

现在咱们来结合刚才电影中的事迹来写一个论证段吧！

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Mark Zuckerberg created a program called Facemash that let students select the best looking person from a choice of photos, but the college shut it down because it had overwhelmed Harvard's network and prevented students from accessing the Internet. In addition, many students complained that their photos were being used without permission, the student paper even ran articles stating that his site was "completely improper.” However, he learnt from this failure and started to re？ect seriously what he really wanted to do. Finally, he launched Facebook——the social network that has changed the world ever since. Just as he once said, and I quote here "Move fast and break things. Unless you are breaking stuff, you are not moving fast enough.”或者这样结尾：The biggest risk is not taking any risk. In a world that's changing really quickly, the only strategy that is guaranteed to fail is not taking risks.

(举例论证+例？分析：121字plus)

打开思路，在一个事件中发现不同的侧面，并且整理好语言，论证真的没有那么难对不对？

再来看一个TPO题目：

Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.（TPO20）

是不是也可以用这个例子？

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打开了思路后，SAT的写作也可以用这些例子哦！来一起看一些SAT的写作题目：

Do people accomplish more when they are allowed to do things in their own way?

Is it necessary to make mistakes, even when doing so has negative consequences for other people?

Is it sometimes better to take risks than to follow a more reasonable course of action?

小伙伴们看了这么多期美剧-托福写作课，有没有感受到平时很多有助于提升英语能里的素材就被自己忽略掉了呢？那就开始多挖掘、多思考、多积累吧！这个过程就是进步的过程哟！

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机会总是给有准备的人~

机会总是给有准备的人~

重要的事情，放在最后，triple一下~

只要坚持下去，下一个写作满分就是你咯！

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