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托福写作语病解析

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2015-06-17 来源:新通整理 作者: 阅读量: 手机阅读

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小编整理了一些托福写作中经常出现的语病错误,希望大家查漏补缺,尽量避免这些不必要的错误。

小编整理了一些托福写作中经常出现的语病错误,希望大家查漏补缺,尽量避免这些不必要的错误。

 1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
  改进:Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.
  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
  3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
  改进:You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
  6. Their brain is still very young.
  改进: They are still immature.
  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
  8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

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