雅思小作文开头段改写方法

本文将以下面这道小作文题目为例，分析一下小作文开头段改写的方法：

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

1 句型改写
　　The graph shows/gives the information about_________ (原题）
　　The focus of the graph is fixed on the introduction of________             .
　　The main concern of the graph is to introduce/ compare________

2 时间改写
　　between March 1993 and March 1999 ——during the period from March 1993 to March 1999

3 国家地名改写（具体——概括）
　　in US and Japan——in two different countries
　　至此可改写为：The focus of  the line chart is fixed on the introduction of the unemployment rates in two different countries( US and Japan) during the period from March 1993 to March 1999

4 同义词替换
　　the unemployment rates——the rates of unemployment
　　the jobless rates

5 名词—— 从句 转换    
　　unemployment rates——how unemployment rates changed
　　N——how N changed
　　changes in/of N ——how N changed
　　最终可改写为：The focus of the line chart is fixed on the introduction of how unemployment rates changed in two different countries( US and Japan) during the period from March 1993 to March 1999.

根据以上方法可将  The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
　　改写为：
　　The main concern of the pie charts is to compare how a UK school' s spending changed between 1981 and 2001.

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