托福写作比较题高分范文欣赏

Do you agree or disagree: all school teachers should be required to takecourses every five years to update their knowledge. 

题型：比较

论点：让步

角度：利弊分析

开头：同意所有教师每5 年就要去参加培训以更新知识。(话题引入+某一派的观点/做法+我的观点及过渡)

The remarkable progress of society embodiesnot only in the prosperity of economy, but also in the explosion of information.New concepts and ideas have been emerging one after another, which profoundly influenceall walks of life including the field of education. Faced with such a trend, someschool authorities require their teachers to take courses every 5 years in orderto keep abreast of the times. Opinions are divided and personally speaking, I ama big fan of this policy. My reasons and examples are given below. (88 字)

中间段1：教师定期上课进修能更新自身的教学法，以更好地教育学生。(主题句+解释+细节扩展)

Firstly, taking courses on a regular basis isconducive to updating teachers’ teaching methodology. The evolution of people’sperception of the nature of education demands that the old--‐fashioned wayof educating should be always updated and improved. In the courses, teachers aregiven the opportunity to learn to employ the new and more efficient teaching methodologies.For example, in the past, a good teacher was deemed as someone who could successfullycram the knowledge into the minds of students and help them get a high score inexams. But today, people begin to realize the importance of inspiring students’potential and motivation. (102 字)

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中间段2：人文和科技在发展，教师要更新知识才能保证传授给学生的知识不是过时落伍的。(主题句+解释+细节扩展)

Secondly, updating teachers’ knowledge by takingcourses regularly makes sure that the knowledge imparted to students is not leftbehind the times. The rapid development of science and technology proves wrong whatwas considered right before time. Thus, the teachers who still hold onto the out--‐of--‐date knowledgeblock the way of students’ access to the truth, which deviates from the duty ofteachers. For example, it was long believed that there were 9 planets in solar system,but in 2006 the scientists ruled out Pluto by classifying it as a dwarf planet.And teachers of astronomy are obliged to catch up with the latest changes of relevantknowledge. (107 字)

让步段：当然，教师更新自己的知识有很多种其他方式，比如自己看书、上网查询相关资料，但是以上做法只适合于那些自觉性很高的老师，如果学校不作要求就不能提升整体教师的教学能力。(承认主观点不到位的地方+打压)

Admittedly, there are many other ways for teachersto update their knowledge such as reading books, searching relevant knowledge andinformation online and taking part in seminars. But the above--‐mentioned waysare only effective for those self--‐motivated teachers.Inertia and procrastination may well stop quite a few teachers from improving themselves.It is only school authority makes it mandatory for teachers to take courses regularlythat can increase their teaching capability overall. (72 字)

结尾：重申观点，归纳理由/升华主题

From what has been discussed above, we may safelydraw a conclusion that all school teachers should be required to take courses toupdate their knowledge. As an old saying goes, “it is never too old tolearn”. Being a teacher does not mean that he or she can stop learning. Instead,only those teachers who constantly learn something new and study in their fieldslive up to the glory of this profession.(74 字)

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