雅思写作结尾高分技巧及解析

雅思写作中很多学生喜欢虎头蛇尾，开头写的很精彩，结尾却是草草了事，雅思写作能否得高分与作文结尾有着很大的关系，下面新通外语教你如何写出雅思高分作文结尾。

雅思大作文结尾技巧一：回答问题 answer the question

E.g.1

When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways oflife die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditionsalive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be ourfriend and support our way of life.

这个结尾段落明确的提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。

雅思大作文结尾技巧二：不要添加新的信息 not apply any new information

E.g.2

Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achievinghappiness?

Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I thinkthese are the two factors that may be the most important for achievinghappiness.

用1句话明确自己的观点，幸福很难定义，可能有两个因素起到作用。

雅思大作文结尾技巧三：2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are enough

E.g.3

Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational;otherwise they are a complete waste of time.

Do you agree or disagree?

Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need torelax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational oracademic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, whichis the last thing parents would want.

2句话，作者的态度很明确，学生不可能花所有的时间去学习，否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣，所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。

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一般在结尾段的最开始部分，考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词，让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句：

信号词：Finally, to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, therefore, thus,overall

句型：

1. it can be concluded that…

2. we can find that…

3. I think it is also important to remember that

4. the main point is to make sure that

5. I believe that/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agreethat/ My view is that

雅思大作文结尾技巧四：可采用的技巧

1.总结式(重述前文)

把在前文中的观点在结尾段进行重述，但是不能出现与开头段或者题目中的单词重复。

E.g.4

*In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.

What do you think are the cause of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and highquality nursery schools could be established that would support families more interms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind ofparental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families,but for society as a whole.

把solutions进行的简单的再次描写--父母、好的托儿所、政府的资金扶助。

*Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this ishappening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbishproduced?

I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in thegeneral public.Children can be educated about environmental issues at school,but adults need to take action.Governments can encourage such action by puttingtaxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and byfining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

重述上文的内容，由政府采取措施—提高意识(children & adult)

--具体措施(提高价格、循环利用、罚款)

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2.两分式

把文章涉及到的主题人或者物分成两种，对其进行分别的说明。

E.g.5

*In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.Somepeople regard this ad completely wrong, while others consider it as valuablework experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.What are youropinions on this?

Nevertheless, in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose tosend their children out to full-time paid work.If learning responsibilities andwork experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire theseby having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping theirparents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value inchildren's development.

对于有钱的家庭而言，家长很少送小孩去做童工;如果是为了钱或者其他，可做兼职。

*Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoidingchange.Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizingfor individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, includingthat which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.

如果是人们自己的选择那么改变是一件好的事情，但如果是被强加于身，改变则不会带来任何可喜的效果。

3.折中式

很难判断

In conclusion, I do not think其中到底谁占据主导地位，或者什么是最重要的，两者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。

E.g.6

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much moreinfluence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have inour life.

That either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but thatboth have powerful effects.How these factors interact is still unknown today andthey remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.

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两者是缺一不可的，天赋和后天培养同等重要。

4.转折对比式

提出另一种群体，与之相比，会产生什么效果来支持自己的观点。

E.g.7

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money thanpeople in other important professionals.Some people think this is fullyjustified while others think it is unfair.

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is morejustified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, itindicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essentialprofessions and achievements.

把运动员与其他方面的工作人员进行对比—比上不足比下有余。

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