实用托福写作技巧分享

托福是一门标准化语言测试，考查的是考生运用语言的能力。托福写作作为一项输出的考试英目，更是直接检验了受试者的语言基本功。下面是新通南京托福培训老师周灵子提供的两个托福写作技巧，希望可以提高你的托福写作水平。

托福写作技巧一：多用主动语态、动词化的表达，避免用被动语态、系动词的表达

在托福写作中，用一些形象、准确的动词可以使文章看起来更生动，更活泼。而过多的”be”的表达方法，使整篇文章乏味空洞。例如下面这两个例子：:

1. The quarterback’s wretched performance was a disgrace to his team.

was a disgrace就是一个典型的系表结构，”对于团队来说是一个羞辱”远不如“羞辱了团队”来得更生动，因此更好的表达方法为：

The quarterback’s wretched performance humiliated his team.

2.  Jamie was happy to be part of the all-star soccer team.

“be happy to do”这种表达虽然没有错误，但此类用法被用得过多，显得平淡无奇，完全可以用一个动词“thrill”来使整个句子脱离平庸的表达方式：

Being a part of the all-star soccer team thrilled Jamie.

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托福写作技巧二：多用具体的表达，尽量避免空洞的单词和词组

1. 在托福写作中，一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

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