托福写作中常犯的错误

对于许多中国考生来说，托福写作是很头疼的一部分，其实很多考上在托福写作时经常会犯一些小的错误，会直接影响托福写作成绩，下面是为大家整理的托福写作常见错误，或者会对大家的备考有所帮助。

1、用词不当

学生们在新托福写作备考中或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。

In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

problems应改为questions

2、拼写错误

这里的拼写错误不是指在托福考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

judgement应改为judgment

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3、乱用大词

First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn't too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：

1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;

2)although和but是不能连用的;

3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

4、表达中式

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

该句的表达过于中式化。

5、表意重复

They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

The show is so compelling but attractive.

compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。

6、例证夸张

For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient's immediate death.

虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。

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7、固定用法错误

To some extends, I agree with the author's general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

To some extends应改为To some extent

8、词性混乱

However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

9、成分多余

According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

10、时态错误

新托福写作备考中的大作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子，用过去时态。

Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

claimed应该改为claim。

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