ETC考官托福写作满分样文

对于网上流传的“满分样文”，某些文章语言的确赞赏有加，但是思路和文章结构却与满分有差距。其实，ETS从来没有公布过满分文章的规范写法，也就是说：新托福独立写作是没有“范文的”，我们可以看到的也许仅仅是获取满分不充分条件的“样文”。

托福独立写作段落数量必须为五段话：

托幅独立写作必须写到300个单词，如果少于这个数目会扣分；

写作语言要长短句结合（问题是：我们怎么定义长句子、短句子？）；

托福写作需要让步，体现考生的思辨思维；

托福写作句子越长越好，长句子体现了考生过硬的语法功底；

托福写作不能使用口语化的句子和词汇，必须使用正式的书面语言。

为了更好地同学们学习托福写作，小编特意找来被ETS认可的一位考官的满分独立写作附下，并且标记一些可以思考的写作套路：

题目：Do you agree or disagree: nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.

考官满分样文（部分）

The statement tries to tell us that, compared with the past, students living today are less likely to revere the faculties in school. (重述考题信息) A quick reflection towards our life, many common occurrences in education jump into our mind: Due to the limitations, many teachers are incapable of teaching much latest information to students; due to insufficient experiences on marketing, the professors responsible for teaching Marketing Principles could become less competent to present lectures with amounts of valuable information.(列举一些与我观点相反的事实) However, based on my personal study, I am holding an opposite view, believing that student, whether those studying in high schools or pursing academia in colleges or universities, are more likely to respect teachers, not less so.（给出我的观点。大家可以思考：我为什么会在句子中间插入whether… universities的论述呢？这也是考官眼里认为合格的开头段需要具备的特点。）

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Take the students in high school for example: because of the increasing difficulty in exams, the students in school will be more dependent on teachers’ help to tackle these tough questions, which indicates that they will surely respect teachers much more. (这是第一个分论点。你是不是觉得有点蹊跷：为什么第一句话是一个例子？)Let’s assume the math exams in high school: in contrast of past tests, the math exams today are equipped with more complex problems to solve, like sets understanding, plane geometry cracking and so forth. And this means that the students in high school cannot ace these questions by themselves alone. Rather, the assistance from teachers outshines: intensive training before exams and the online courses through the internet. In light of this phenomenon, how could these teenagers be less likely to respect teachers? (这是证明分论点的事实，这个语言完全符合满分的fully developed. 你能找到足够具体的细节吗？)Another case in mind: students who want to pass the English exams in school could also rely more on teachers, since the requirements of English learning are far more demanding. Compared with past, today’s learning English includes pronunciation skills, oral communications and even the paper writings. （这个细节一定要有）Therefore, it is hard for us to imagine the students without guidance from teachers will achieve ideal scores on these kinds of tests.

大家可以思考这段话：所列举的事实是不是非常“深奥”？段落中的“increasing difficulty in exams”是如何在后文进一步探讨的，又提出了哪些考试来证明呢？大家会发现，段落字数虽然不少，但其实一直围绕第一句话来展开的。换言之，文章没有论述第一句信息之外的内容。这就是考官所认为的“well-organized”和“unity”。你看，如果我们大家不知道托福考官需要你写什么，你还会纠结自己每周需要练习几篇文章吗？这就是为什么练习的数量多少与得分没有必然关系的理由所在。 

写到这里，小编最后给大家推荐一些好的“样文”来源：

你所读的文章本身就是他人的习作：所以请仔细阅读托福真题中的阅读文章吧！

新托福官方指南上考官所给的样文；

大家可以参考老托福185道题目所附的高分学员样文；

大家可以参考一些经典的海外写作书籍，比如美国大学英语写作等。里面很多段落写作和写作原理完全适用于托福独立写作。

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