雅思写作的八种失败开头 中式英文人见人晕

好的开头对于文章往往能够增色不少，而一些雅思写作失败开头往往也会拉低整个整个作文的分数，为此新通教育安徽留学外语专家为大家收集整理八大雅思写作失败开头，希望对你有所帮助！

雅思写作失败开头1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

雅思写作失败开头二：中式英文人见人晕 (喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

雅思写作失败开头三：观点模糊态度暧昧 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

雅思写作失败开头四：偏离主题无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

雅思写作失败开头五：语法错误惨不忍睹 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

雅思写作失败开头六：过分简单没有重点 (喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

雅思写作失败开头七：用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

雅思写作失败开头八：意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

了解更多外语培训信息

欢迎拨打新通教育免费热线电话：400-618-0272

官方微信：安徽新通留学(微信账号：shinywayAH);新浪官方微博：

新通安徽电话：0551-66195888/999  官方QQ 号1921169960